March 12, 2025 By Mrs. Phindile Van Jaarsveld

Questions Clients Ask Before Starting

A grounded look at the concerns writers raise before they commit to a new manuscript or a major revision.

Every writing project begins with a conversation, and most of those conversations circle the same few worries. People ask about time, about whether their idea is strong enough, and about how they will know when a draft is actually done. These questions are not a sign of doubt. They are a sign that the writer is taking the work seriously.

The most common question is about length. New novelists want to know how many words a chapter should run, or whether their manuscript is too short. The honest answer is that length follows structure. A scene that moves the plot and reveals character can be three hundred words or three thousand. What matters is that each chapter earns its place. I usually suggest writers stop counting words and start checking whether every scene changes something.

The second question is about voice. Writers worry that their prose sounds flat or that it mimics a favorite author too closely. This is normal in early drafts. Voice is not something you invent; it is something you uncover by writing badly for a while. The fix is practical: read your dialogue out loud, cut adverbs, and pay attention to the rhythm of your sentences. After a few weeks, the borrowed style falls away and your own cadence appears.

Then there is the question of planning. Some writers want a detailed outline before they type a single word. Others prefer to discover the story as they go. Both approaches work, but they fail when applied rigidly. A plan should be a map, not a cage. If you outline, leave room for surprises. If you write by the seat of your pants, stop every few chapters to check where the story is heading. The goal is not to pick a method but to keep the narrative coherent.

Finally, people ask about revision. They want to know how many passes a manuscript needs before it is ready to share. There is no fixed number, but there is a useful sequence. Start with structure: fix plot holes, pacing, and character arcs. Then move to scene-level work: tighten dialogue, sharpen descriptions, and cut repetition. End with line edits for grammar and rhythm. If you follow that order, you will not waste time polishing sentences that later get cut.

These questions come up again and again, and they deserve straight answers. The writing process is not mysterious. It is a series of decisions made one after another, with patience and a willingness to revise. If you are asking these questions before you start, you are already on the right track.

Meet the editor behind the prompts

Practical craft notes, revision checklists, and character work from someone who reads slush piles for a living.

I’m Phindile Van Jaarsveld, a fiction editor and writing coach. For the past decade I’ve helped novelists and short-story writers tighten dialogue, fix pacing, and find the emotional core of a scene. Before Avareed, I ran manuscript workshops and edited for small presses. I still read a new craft book every month, but I learn the most from messy first drafts.

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